Reviews
A Lead Box by *DoombahPottyPants*
From: BagOfHearts
Date: 2005-11-11
Chapter: 1
*reads what Phantom said...* what the hell was that?! that little poem thing is amazing! but *cough* yah, i liked this. i'm not a big fan of these types of standalone's, but this one was a good read ;) 7/10
From: Phantom
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Date: 2005-11-05
Chapter: 1
Good on ya Sam. *Sarcasm* Could have saved it for some better fitting time and honey, I'd take your place ANY fucking time.
The angel held his fallen form
Soothed the broken heart so torn
With all the tears he shed so pained
She gave him wings to fly untamed
“Do not weep,” the angel said
“Though you wish that you were dead,”
“You’re burdened not with that box of lead”
He turned and saw that she was right
And smiling he lay down feather light
From: princessANN
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Date: 2005-11-04
Chapter: 1
Sam you motherfucking bitch!! I just...little whore...how dare her...
From: Bitty
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Date: 2005-11-04
Chapter: 1
that was fuckin cruel of sam
great job
~Bitty~
From: VenusDoom666
Date: 2005-11-04
Chapter: 1
That was harsh of her. I hope she never got mad at him in real life for never being around cause she was the one who incuraged him to audition for LP to begin with. God I hate women like that. I would have gladly taking her place and married Chester. Anyways, good story! I hate when Chester kills himself but it was fitting to the story i guess.
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From: chazzy kid
Date: 2008-10-17
Chapter: 1
I hate sam! (in this story AND real life)! She's a stupid little groupie who only wanted him for the money! She didn't love him for who he is but his new wife makes Sam look like trash! I like Talinda! She loves Chester, unlike Sam.
Great story! Sorry it took me so long to review!!