AHAHAHAAHA

feel-good story of the year.

you get alpha-plus!!!!!!!!!

omg..that was beautiful..

absolutly wonderful...:)

great job!

~Bitty~

Awesome. I loved it. =)

This was amazing, I cant even begin to tell you how much I loved this! The way you told it and just...just everything! wonderful piece of work!

two words

fawk-ing great

ok three!

dude was so awsome!loveed it!

this was amazing

I'm a person of few words so all i can say is.......good story.

Well, another brilliant piece of writing from you. I absolutely like her thoughts and her desperation. It's written so perfectly and it's so fucking sad. Because it's a standalone the time frame sometimes felt a little bit rushed but I know exactly how that is. And the reason why I'm mentioning it is solely because I would have loved to read more in between the days. I wanted to smack Brad constantly and god, that was hard when she founds them. She's such a fragile character, such a lost soul who had stopped somewhere in life and is now stuck. There is not change aside from these few desperate acts. Until the end, that was almost expected but still came as a shock. Manly because of her reaction to it. There is such a sadness because she does love him and that's the whole awful twist in this story. I loved it! Absolutely enjoyed that angst-ride.

Erica, wonderful job my dear, I loved it!