Thats really good, I love how you wrote it. I hope you update soon

I like this story... UPDATE REALLY SOON I WANT TO KNOW THAT HAPPINS TO CHESTER!

that was really cool. I like how you set it up. it was really dramic

*sniff*

You're really good with the hopelessness and utter despair stuff.

Good Job.

Wicked like always Max. I think your writing styles and ideas are amazing. I'm always on the look out for a Max fic.

Again this one was well written (how come some of the best stuff comes out while high/stoned/drunk?) and thoughtful. I can see why it's a standalone but i'd love for a fic with this idea.. don't think i've read one like that...

Keep up the good work.

Kirstie

*sobs*

Gah… poor Chester… wow… very… uh… powerful story!!!! Whoa… *shakes head* That was incredible… disturbing, maybe, but incredible!!!! Gahhh!

-Piper (dA HyPeR OnE)

That was good, it might have been even more powerful from Chester's POV, I dunno...

It was still a great read though, everything flowed really well :)

-cries- That was... -sniff-...so sad. And yet...-blows nose-...so good.

I love what you write. =)

That was friggin sad! But friggin good!

...whoa. THAT was fucking awesome. very powerful. gahhh.

dude its so like kewl!

will there be more chappys?

i will review you!

this was good, it was really well written and you described all the emotions perfectly! i could totally understand why ches did it, why he couldn't stop, everything! well done you!

:)