that was......great!

~Bitty~

*blinks* wow. i'm speechless. this story.. it's beautiful. i love it. i'm adding it to my favorites.

That was amazing..

One Word...WOW

well, since Bibi plugged this fic on the boards, I thought I'd give it a try. turns out it's fabulous.. Bibi's never wrong, you know. :D

anyway, I really loved your descriptions. I was a little confused at the beginning, but that's only because I haven't had my coffee yet and therefore, my brain isn't really working properly. nevertheless, I thought this was a brilliant piece of writing and I'm glad you decided to post it. fantastic job, hon. I hope to see more from you.

Woah! Even though I myself am a huge Chaz/Talinda shipper myself that was bloody brilliant. I absolutely loved the entire fic, you're words and descriptions and the atmosphere you granted. The tragic yet truly beautifully moving ending was fitting so perfectly that I almost cried. I absolutely loved this one. I loved your insights about life and pressume most of it came from you and I had so much joy in reading it. It was well-structured and you've created a soft yet still gripping tension as we follow the mind's journey. Wonderful! *hugs*

wow... thats all i got to say.