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Simplicity by PepsiCola

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From: SteppinRazor

Email: Logged Out

Date: 2008-05-06

Chapter: 2

this made me so happy... I loved it, thanks!

From: Artixan

Date: 2007-11-21

Chapter: 2

I really loved this.

=]

From: Sparky

Date: 2005-06-12

Chapter: 2

I'm sry...! I forgot to review this one! *shakes head at self* Anyhow, I really liked this one. It was very cute and well written. I love Brad/Rob bc I think they would look adorable together. You did great! =)

From: Cali Bennington

Date: 2005-06-11

Chapter: 2

That was beautiful. Simply beautiful.

...Sequel? Please? Maybe? *grin*


great job, mi amour. Cookies for you!


Cali

From: twilight

Email: shinodarely@yahoo.com

Date: 2005-06-11

Chapter: 2

dont we all wish we could all be happy..*sigh* i am glad that things are working out for Brad and Rob, they make a great couple and complexity is the way of life...i dont even know if complexity is a word..hmmm...anywhoo.... chester always has mike...and damnit dont we all wish we always had mike..... I am just waiting on abated breath for the next chapter....hmmmm abated that a word too?

From: twilight

Email: shinodarely@yahoo.com

Date: 2005-06-11

Chapter: 2

dont we all wish we could all be happy..*sigh* i am glad that things are working out for Brad and Rob, they make a great couple and complexity is the way of life...i dont even know if complexity is a word..hmmm...anywhoo.... chester always has mike...and damnit dont we all wish we always had mike..... I am just waiting on abated breath for the next chapter....hmmmm abated that a word too?

From: liberating.labia

Date: 2005-06-11

Chapter: 2

Jiggles, darling. I adore it.


Complexity. Simplicity.

Poor Chester!


I'm not goign to tell you write more. But just so you know, I love it either way. ^_^

From: linkinloopy

Email:

Date: 2005-06-11

Chapter: 2

I LOVE this, its so... so...gah I can't even explain, I'll have to get back to you on the details, but know you are amazing!

From: Disjointed Heart

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 2

I really like this story...its different...please update!

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 2

cute

From: Jackster

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 2

we weee-wooo u updated!

loved it buddy!

but why does it have to end :-(!

From: MissB

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 1

Hmm, what can I say? It was beautifully written as always. I love your way of words and the flow in your writing. I loved that Dave gets cold feet and the mention of Chester's sad eyes during the wedding.

However, i have to admit I kinda missed something. In the first chapter it Rob's problems seemed so much more serious yet in this one they are quickly gone. You've taken the Angst out, Girl! It's not bad or anything I guess i just expected something else. But you know me and my twisted mind so don't take that too seriously lol Aside from the fact that I felt this should have been more stretched out it was beautiful and moving and so goddamn sweet.

wonderful job

bibi

From: Hmaddox1

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 1

Awwwwwwwwwwwww....you're ending it here? But it was just getting cute with Brad and Rob!!!


Very well done! I adored it!!

From: robbourdon/phe

Email:

Date: 2005-06-10

Chapter: 1

wow....this was a great! story i loved it you played rob's part so well...i hope you write more storys like this one.

From: lil slash monkee87

Email:

Date: 2005-06-07

Chapter: 1

Must have more. update soon please. this is freakin' awesome. Cheers :)

From: hattu

Date: 2005-06-02

Chapter: 1

That is awesome! I can´t wait to see the second part.

If I were Dave I proably would have killed Brad...

I like to know more about Rob and I´m curious about what will happen between him and Brad.


So you see I can´t wait for an update!

From: Raven

Email:

Date: 2005-05-29

Chapter: 1

youre a very freaking evil person for stopping there. *glares* please update this again like majorly fast

From: MissB

Date: 2005-05-28

Chapter: 1

Uh, what's wrong with Rob? I like this and I like the style in which is written. Everything around Brad seems kinda normal. His friend is about to get married and then you have Rob, whose so unexplained. In a good way. He comes on strong doesn't want any promises and tries to fight his problems with sex. That's more than enough for me and I'm hooked! Can't wait for an update.

bibi

From: Vixenla

Date: 2005-05-28

Chapter: 1

Whoa Pepsi, making the little drummer boy very forceful huh. It's always those quiet ones.

From: Cutting_Deeper

Date: 2005-05-28

Chapter: 1

WOW this is so freakin good so far! It's like watching two people in real life. I love it! You definitly are an awesome writer! Keep up the great work! I love your story!

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