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Forbidden Love by Marz&Dee

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From: sisco

Date: 2009-02-22

Chapter: 14

i read the story for a long time.it is not some kind of typical twist&turn story,however, it nailed at m&c feeling for each other.the description covered all parts of the story and in some way,it is better to describe things like these than to make all efforts on the variety of storyline. so it gets me by its own way and is unforgetable to me.

From: NobodY

Email:

Date: 2007-02-09

Chapter: 14

I love this story It's so sweet :)


Anyways dysthymia can be diagnostised after 3 years, with the symptoms of mild depressive disorder. that's why It's chronic.

From: ♥nia

Date: 2007-02-02

Chapter: 14

I just read the whole thing. Amazing! Brad scared me though.


I'm glad everybody got something out of it but Samantha didn't. It doesn't matter because Michael & Chester are together, that makes up for everything. :-)


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From: TYshangshan

Date: 2007-01-31

Chapter: 14

Wow~~i love it~~~~

That's very very INTERESTING!

From: Kelly

Date: 2007-01-30

Chapter: 14

wow. Please Excuse My Dumb Ass Stupid review for chap 13. :) PEMDAS!!!

From: Kelly

Date: 2007-01-30

Chapter: 14

WHAT!?!?!?! HAHAHAHA THAT WAS HILARIOUS! you guys are great

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2007-01-30

Chapter: 14

Heh that was awesome! Wonderful chapter!

From: DisasterousLetdown

Date: 2006-03-03

Chapter: 13

Damnit why couldn't Brad have left them alone??? They were gonna be happy!!! He only killed Mike didn't he? He let Chester live right?


Damnit I'm so mad right now, but this was an incredible story. Thanks for sharing it!

From: bleeding chaos </3

Date: 2006-02-26

Chapter: 13

EPILOUGE!!!!!

SEQUEL!

SOMETHING!!

this is an awesome story

~Bitty~

From: Saewyn Oleander

Email: .....

Date: 2006-02-18

Chapter: 13

Pfft. I cannot believe this!! Build it up so well... and then have Brad's character just go.. spastic. So out-of-character it's not even plausible. It's just NOT.

I loved this, but this rush-to-the-finish ending screwed it all up, all that hard work and you end it so very badly.

I am very disappointed. I had so much hope for this story, I really did.

From: Kelly

Date: 2006-02-12

Chapter: 13

I can't fucking believe this. I saw that this fic was updated and it was such a long time ago that I actually had read it... and then yeah I read like 5 chapters to keep up and then you kill Mike? Do you know how long it takes to read 5 chapters of this story!? I am fucking dissapointed! :(

From: anonimus

Email: kdj@yahoo.com

Date: 2006-02-12

Chapter: 13

bitch!!!(goes for all sexes) U killed Mike!!! other than that, the story was GREAT!!! I loved the love triangles. Amaizing. Good job

From: Vampire Princess

Date: 2006-02-09

Chapter: 13

Gah! Horrid ending just horrid! *cries* o well, I knew that they wouldn't end up together due to the tittle, but it was still sad.


Wonderful story none the less.


Peace out!


-Vampire Princess

From:

Date: 2006-02-07

Chapter: 13

Hey, sorry, I've just gone mad a little. In fact, it's not little but...

Well, just not like I can't accept a sad ending or sth surprising but I don't want an artwork like this story would end up that fast and god, i don't know . But I don't think that you have built up this story for so long just to break it in one min. It will be nonsense. NOO..The story is fucking great. I love it. Great writting style adn great plot. But this ending is too abrupt. Any way, you succeded in surprising me, or killing me, whatever.

PHeww...

Please, please, please, don't tell me it ends like that.

By the way, you two don't do "DearDiary" anymore? Why? IT's too good. And your mailboxes seem to be Ok now. Answer me soon or you'll get my blackmail*still hiccup, grab Mikey and cry into his plump ass*

From:

Date: 2006-02-07

Chapter: 13

WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT? MAN, ARE YOU FUCKING WITH ME? I CAN'T BELIEVE IT.

God, it was heartbreaking and then suddenly it knocked me out with that kind of ending. The story is too great to have an end like that. Hey, you two must do a epilogue or anything else. May not happy ending but not that...blunt? I don't know, i can't believe it. Hey I'm sorry if i overacted but GODDAMNIT, ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME? Or it's another trick of you?

God, You fucking killed me. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

From: no one specia;

Email:

Date: 2006-02-07

Chapter: 13

WTF!!!iii!!! could you mess with my emotions anymore? My poor Mike. Why couldnt him and chaz be together. WHY!!!?? ERRR i am pissed. But wow you did a fantasic job with the story.

From: Vixenla

Date: 2006-02-06

Chapter: 13

Damn that sucks. Oh, not the story! What happened to Mike and Chester. Brad......Anna will never love you!!

From: no one special

Email:

Date: 2006-01-29

Chapter: 12

What the hell!i! I love this story yyou cant leave me hanging like this. *cries* Please Please Please update soon it is going to drive me crazy!!!!!!!!!!!!

From: shinoda_sex

Email: lie_2_me_@hotmail.com

Date: 2005-09-30

Chapter: 12

chapter 5.. its deserves a big W.T.F.!!! you should have seen my face.. oh god.. whats is this?.. that better be a dream man.. cuz holy crap.. WTF.. i dont know what else to say.. i'm still in shock and in awe.. lol.. wtf.. ok.. calm downnnnn.. other than that being umm.. 'whoa'.. it was good.. awesome.. but omg.. wtf..


lol.. sry

From: i shit on my head

Email:

Date: 2005-09-30

Chapter: 12

chaz is a bastard

well , he's a whore.

and i love Mike

and i feel jealous as if i was mike

wohh

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