hey is story is one of my favo plz update soon as u can

hey come on what r u waiting for?update now plz plz

What are you waiting for?! Keep the good story rolling! I like the imagery and your choice of words. It makes it sem more real.

[read mine too!]

Added to my favorits. What else can I say? Update soon!

please update this. i like it

To Faded Innocence, the song lyrics aren't mine, they're from an LP song called Piecing the Skin. ^_^;

I really like it so far and I can't wait to read more. Update soon please!!!

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I enjoyed that soo much. I love how you described why he was doing what he was doing, rather than just expecting us to know.

I do have a quick question though. Are the lyrics things in italics yours, or are they a song? If they're yours, they are really good. :D

Awesome job!

Heeeey, I was expecting an update, not a re-post. Meh. getting people excited for nothing.