WoW. u noe im respecting you as an author now because ive read one other fic of yours and it was also awesome but it was very different you have your own way of writing and a differnt imagination than most. And this story is by far the most different. I enjoyed it especially the end it is mysterous why Chester crys...at least to me lol. But somehow I like if there is another chap i would like an update LoL ~ [mE]

Breathtaking.

Brad/Chester is my new favourite thing so it's really good to finally read a story with that pairing in it.

This is a really good fic, it's so unique, so very different to anything I've ever read before yet the style in which you write leaves no questions asked; it is believable, an enjoyment to read. I love how you combined the lyrics into it as well.

There's more right? I look forward to it.

I'm shameless. It was your sidenote of gay pr0n that had me clicking. What can I say, I'm easily amused.

FyrMaiden has summed this piece up completely. How she always manages to touch on those perfect lines that stand out still boggles me, but after reading this, I actually wrote down something that I could leave you with.

I was wondering why you made Chester a fish. Be any animal, never a fish, and I was quite surprised. When Brad spoke of Chester shimmering, I thought of it in more ways then one, and eventually Brad seemed to as well.

The end was more than heartbreaking. As Chester cried, I couldn't stop my own sobs from coming forth. In the whole scheme of things, it's a mystery as to why he weeps, yet his grief and sorrow somehow are truly evident.

How this story on had two reviews when I was finished reading and clicked the button is shocking. This piece is so full of anguish and beauty, and is now a favorite. Thank you for writing it.

Yeah!!! I was beginning to think that all my begging and shameless (oh so shameless!) pleading for you to write a new fic was gong to be fruitless, but no! Lo and behold!! I am so indescribably happy!

I love how you use Chester's "condition", whether actual or symbolic, to emphasize where the true changes lie. Though I suspect that by the end, Brad just may change Chester as much as Chester has changed Brad ; ) Or maybe it's just wishfull thinking... : )

By the way, I thought this was interesting. Did you know that Chester was a Junior Olympic swimmer? Kinda ironic isn't it? : P

Anyways, wonderful writing as always. I said this once, and I'll say it again, you are one of the most incredible writers ever! Waiting with bated breath for chapter 2! Gills sure would be helpfull...

Holy... I don't know what to say, I don't know where to start. This was just so surreal, so devastatingly and achingly beautiful. How is it that you consistently write these snapshots of heartbreak? Every new scene is complete disparate from the one before it, and yet pasted together they form a coherent whole. You paint pictures with your words. And you do in such a short space of time. People write novels to get across what you did in there...

Just. Wow. I'm going to... copy/paste to Word or print this or something. So few things move me to tears but this certainly managed it.